As my wife described it: Dude, it started, 2h went by, and they were at the same place. When in 2h nothing really happens, well, the story isn’t working.

As someone that works professionally as a storytelling, I think you nailed it. The story just doesn’t move. There is no rhythm to it (among many other problems).

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Chief Editor at The Aleph Report (@thealeph_report), CEO at Press42.com, Cofounder & associated editor @tech_eu, former editor @KernelMag.

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Alex Barrera

Alex Barrera

Chief Editor at The Aleph Report (@thealeph_report), CEO at Press42.com, Cofounder & associated editor @tech_eu, former editor @KernelMag.